I think your comment was very well stated. It'll probably take the girl a few moments to know what to think, because it is a bit like a slap in the face... but you did soften the blow, so maybe she will actually pay attention to it instead of angsting her little heart out over it.
I don't really write fan fiction... but I have thought about it before. I want to write a HP fic dealing with George and Fred, but I want to have the me-character and Fred DO IT LIKE RABBIT BUNNIES, and no one needs to read that. Plus, I'm having a hard time thinking of a good plot... I find it difficult to take another person's character and write a story about it, because since it wasn't my original character to begin with, I'm worried I might make them say/do something out of character, and I will have none of that! NONE!
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I don't really write fan fiction... but I have thought about it before. I want to write a HP fic dealing with George and Fred, but I want to have the me-character and Fred DO IT LIKE RABBIT BUNNIES, and no one needs to read that. Plus, I'm having a hard time thinking of a good plot... I find it difficult to take another person's character and write a story about it, because since it wasn't my original character to begin with, I'm worried I might make them say/do something out of character, and I will have none of that! NONE!
Yeah... I think I'm done talking now.
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